2012-03 ElderBerries Brochure Reprint

Panel 1: remove the word NSRAP

Panel 2 : top of page, and also in the first paragraph, remove word NSRAP

add a new bullet : presentations by other LGBT organizations

Panel 3 : Now, I'm not sure of this, but should we change the "Email newsletters" section to "Publications," and re-write to say

Monthly email newsletters tell members about upcoming programs and other events.

2012 Recipes, our first cookbook, featured recipes contributed by Elderberry chefs. (I am not too sure of this wording, but wanted to get the cookbook in somehow)

In the Feedback paragraph, remove the word "Recently."

In the "How can I join?" box, put the first line into two sentences : " Membership is free. To join, send an email to : nselderberries@gmail.com"

Panel 4 (beginning of the back page): "What's in a name?" to be moved to top of the double panel 5/6 only First paragraph : Elderberries is an affiliate of the Nova Scotia Rainbow Action Project (NSRAP). NSRAP seeks equality etc etc. Last paragraph : For more on NSRAP, see http://nsrap.ca

Double panel 5/6 :Second paragraph : remove word "extensively."

Folklore section, third bullet : should read "..."lived in the elderberry tree" And the date at the very bottom of the page should be changed to 2012-03.

"What's in a name?" maybe this heading could be in a slightly smaller type. This would make room at the very bottom right for a credit to the artist of the original logo art, as was included in the cookbook, in the very small italic typeface used for the credits to the source of the elderberry folklore.